Tuesday 25 September 2012

12/9/2012 CONCLUSION




1)Techniques in writing conclusion
*end with summary and final thought, essay of a three-step formula. Tell them what you are going to tell them(thesis),tell them(details),tell them what you have told them(conclusion)

2) Techniques in writing conclusion
*include a thought provoking question or short series of question, grabs attention,directs reader to think further,of logic points made earlier in the paper,cover any of these-why the topic is important,what choices are there-closely related to thesis.

3) Techniques in writing conclusion
*end with a prediction or recommendation,states what may happen in future or to suggest what should be done with situation or a problem-closely related to thesis

After that, we had played one game. We need to do conclusion based on the movie that been showed by Miss Zu. So, what's the movie?

1) the widow and her 7 sons. actually the video is created by Petronas for Hari Raya advertisement. 


this is our conclusion, and we get half mark for this conclusion. 

2) bad day. this is the song by daniel porter, and our conclusion would be..


for this conclusion, we get full mark and our group is the highest. 

How sad, Miss Zu could only showed to us 2 video because the time is almost 10 o'clock and Miss Zu didn't return back our term paper yet. Today I feel like the KING OF THE WORLD! why? Again, I got the highest marks which is 9/10 for this term paper. I feel so happppppppppyyyyyy! Seriously! All my hardship had really been paid. No wonder, Miss Zu asked me to show my term paper to the class when we did the discussion essay last night. Thanks lot Miss Zu. Without you, I can't complete this task.   



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